Love is a faithful and affectionate dog,
Licking its owner to brighten up the mood;
Love is an attentive steward of plants,
Cutting toxic weeds that block its growth;
Love is a sturdy and flourishing tree,
Sustaining life with its luscious fruits;
Love is like the flowing fresh blue water,
Satisfying thirst and even our hunger;
Love is as wide as the whistling wind,
Wandering to every corner of the world;
Love is a tiny and ubiquitous atom,
Present in the inside of every being.
Love is a tiny and ubiquitous atom, present in the inside of every being.
Hello there! I wrote this poem as part of my requirements in the subject "Creative Writing." I'm just an amateur in writing poems (despite the years of studying poetry) and I would love to hear your thoughts about my poem above. Please do let me know your ideas, feelings, and criticisms by commenting on this post. Thank you for your time in reading this. Padayon!
- Love, Aly ♥
What is your own definition of love?
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